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Thursday, 23 October 2014

How to keep safe in the sun

It  is safe to have a sun hat because you might get sunburned, and you also have to be in a shade if you don’t have one. So if you stay in the sun too long you might get sun cancer,  you also might get sunstroke and faint.

How would you keep safe in the sun???..........


The first way to stay safe is to remember to always to wear a  hat so you can keep your hair, skin and your eyes.  It can also damage your skin and you will get patches on your skin. The other way to keep your skin safe is to put sunscreen on all of your skin that is showing. Just make sure and keep checking that you put it on properly.


The second way to stay safe was to make sure you bring something to keep you safe in the sun like an umbrella or a gazebo. If you forget to put on your sun screen you might faint or you might faint or you might catch sun cancer is you stay in the sun too much. It is also safe to go into shade if you don’t have a shade yourself. And don’t forget to take a bottle of water to.




you have to make sure you have to have a hat, when you have a hat you have to make sure you always have the right hat. The hat that you need is a big sun hat that covers your face and your head. It also protects you from getting burnt from the sun. So that is how you keep safe in the because if you don't have a hat it might stop you from having fun



Don’t forget to take something to cool you down and and take someone with you.
And last of all  make sure to have fun.




1 comment:

  1. Hey Mahana,
    My name is Natalie Thomson. I am a student at the University of South Alabama in Mobile, AL. I am so happy to be able to comment on your blog today. These are some great tips on how to keep yourself safe in the sun. Sun cancer is not any fun at all! I have a sun hat, but I don't use it that often. When it gets warm again, I will have to bring it out more often to protect myself from skin cancer. It is so easy to forget sometimes. Some of your sentences are incorrect. Here is an example : "you have to make sure you have to have a hat, when you have a hat you have to make sure you always have the right hat." Make sure that you remember to always capitalize the first letter in a sentence and make sure that you aren't creating a run-on sentence. This sentence can be split into 2. Where your comma is, you would instead write a period and capitalize that next word. I do really think your English is pretty good! Keep up the good work!
    Have a great year!
    Natalie Thomson

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